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  • Drinking: black tea
*takes a deep breath*
Okay so... I was once again reading a bunch of realy great fanfictions.

And also once again there was one story I had to read for or because of what ever reason... D:
Mabe I needed something. The title seemed promissing to me.
I don't know why I endured to read it fully till the end. It was the worst typing I've ever read through.
Missing and misplaced punctioations (. , : ! ?). Sentences in sentences turn the whole meaning of it into a mess. The use of past and present at the same time in single sentences and dialouges.
It was carelessy written only for the sake to upload a thought of a story. I have no problem with that I realy like the actual idea for the story and I can understand what she is getting at to some point but all or ... most of what is/was written didn't make any SENSE.
I honestly wanted to cry. Reading through this labyrinth of words gave me a horrible headache...
At last two users commented on it that they liked it... But all they gave was how much they started to hate a certain character more.

It is a badly written story that doesn't make much sense... also Reader-San turned out to be a superhuman... Why? Smacked by the female Titan with full force onto a tree and falling down and still being alive is a thing not even Levi could pull up with without dying some minutes afterward! She swatted the soldiers like flies and killing them. And Reader-San gets smacked into a tree having some of her organs and bones crushed in the process also more pain from falling down on the ground and she still recovered. I think I am looking too much from the logical side here but still. ...

I have to stop now. Srsly. Stories ... No writings and typings like those make me want to rant about it over and over.
Me never understanding why people upload stuff like that.

It's not readable!!! I can't understand why people upload such mess and no one understands it in the fullest. D;


I hope he or she gets it checked by a friend or worst may have to put it down.

 

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~ ♣ Birthday: 04. 25 1990 (mm dd yyyy)
~ ♣ Age: 23
~ ♣ School/work/blah: Education for Painter work (finished)
~ ♣ Hair: long, brown
~ ♣ Eyes: Brown + light pink glasses

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:iconcherrypikkins:
cherrypikkins Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the watch! <3
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cinnamelon Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks so much for the fave! it means a lot! U v U
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Lunime Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student Writer
Your Channel=  Panda Emoji-07 (Snuggy) [V1]  
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:iconyunaasakura:
YunaAsakura Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
meep. Thank you. :3
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Lunime Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student Writer
"Meep?'
Like "Baaahhhh"?
Msn Icon_Oh Sheep_smart 
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:iconyunaasakura:
YunaAsakura Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No,no!! More like "I am surprised someone actuay looks at my channel". XD Meep, just like the sound of a mouse.
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sebo3e Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014
yo
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YunaAsakura Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hello~
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Ria-Sora27 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Hi there!! Sorry for the late comment!! I tagged you!! (*^v^*) Here you go!! Meow :3 
 
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YunaAsakura Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool. I'll try to do it this week. :-)
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